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Re: The White Man's Burden (2008 Version)
Thanks for all the tips, I tried my best to change it a bit so that the rhyme works. You all were right when the rhyming seemed forced, that was ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Among the Lost
There is a lot that you could add in just those two short bits. Advice (take it if you want): rework the story and ad little bits of detail to ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Hide me...
Even though it was short, I loved it! That was beautiful and... IT RHYMED! Same here: you forgot a few punctuations but other than that it was wonderful. !KUDOS!
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Garden of Hideous - Chap. 1
Wow, is there a chapter 2 yet?
May 8, 2008